Wednesday, April 13, 2016


This is my I proud I am blogging it because it is the thing I am proud of. The thing I was proud of is a hot pack writing.
My Best Learning

This is my Mystery Writing.
Hot pack

WALT: create content with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria:

  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Accurate Description of the object
  • Descriptive words

What am I?
The colour in this object is bluey whitish and has a clear plastic coat around it. It can make your sore muscles heel. If you put it by your ear you can hear something's going in the sift. It can smell like a plastic doll. It is like a cold pack but hot. It feels lumpy and like dried up salt also you, feel something smooth at the same time. I can see the word that says Kiwi Warmer and has a pitcher of a kiwi and lots of instructions.

If you have this object in your home you can use it to help your aching back or any muscle injury ,it will help it feel better.  You could have it in your first aid kit. The object that I am talking about is a hot pack.

I am proud of this because I like how it is my best paragraph writing I have done.

My biggest challenge was writing it because I had no idea to write and it was challenging.