Monday, November 16, 2015

Scene Description

Week 1 term 4 we got to pick out of scene description, Charector piece or Speech and I picked scene description, My teacher was Mrs Love.
An example of a simile is He is as brave as a lion.
We have the things have to include. I meet my goal so NOW have a look at it.

Scene Description Mya
Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Use full stops, capital letters, question marks, and exclamation marks correctly.

I turn around and in front of my eyes I see the most beautiful scene. The first thing that my eye sees is the bright lights. The bright lights are as bright as the night stars. Reflections on the clear, shiny water makes it look like there is two bridges. When I visit this place, it has a beautiful colours and I never forget the colours. Its really enchanting to go there. The purple dawn covers the urban landscape. It is very magical. Due to the bright lights, it looks like there is a sunset happening. It’s the most magnificent place.

Saturday, November 14, 2015

Kapahaka festival Year 4 girls

Hi and today I am going to share to you about the kapahaka festival. So I went to the year 4 kapahaka to profrom. My kapahaka teachers were  Mrs Lowe and Mr M. The waiata we did were Parkvale E, Hoki Mai, Tihore Mai Te rangi, tika tonu and we also did Tutira Mai nga iwi.
I learnt how to do the poi for tihore Mai Te rangi.
Here is a photo on the way there on the bus but we don't have black lipstick on yet in the photo there is Mya W Emma F and then Me. We have a moko.
Not my best Pukana by the way.

Meet Irene Van Dyk

On Saturday I went to the sports park to meet Irene Van Dyk. First we lined up but me Mum and Max just walked in the gate. We got heaps of stuff. When we walked in I saw Sophia and Ruby L but Mum spotted Irene Van Dyk. OMG she is so tall. I ran over so she could sign my bib GA and GS after that Mum took a photo of me and here. After that we went for a warm up Irene did it with us. Then we went to our age groups so we could do some activities one of the activities were with Irene it was called rob the nest . The other station I enjoyed was the relaxing under the shade  and that was with the lady that coaches the Pulse. I also saw Powerman and a mascot and the captain of the Pulse. Next we had a warm down.

Later I had to sing a chant and I had to do it in the microphone. I tried to win a netball t shirt by dancing, but I unfortunately I did not get on. After it was prize giving that was when we went home.  It has been a long day for me.

Magazine task

This week we did the magazine task.
We got to pick I wish my parents knew, Favourite thing this year, greatest life achievement and I picked What I want to be when I am older.
Pediatrician For Magazine


When I grow up I want to be a pediatrician so I can look after little people.