Wednesday, May 25, 2016

You should like Star Wars.

Hi guys welcome back to my blog. This post is going to be a learning post. This is my writing/literacy from this week.
Purpose: to PERSUADE
I am learning how to improve my sentence formation
Success Criteria:
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
  • Include simple and compound sentences*
  • Include some complex sentences**
  • State your point of view, then include three big reasons to support it.
Include emotional and persuasive language

Why everyone should like Star Wars.
I think that everyone should like Star Wars.

How come you don’t believe me? I think Star Wars is soo cool, and I think that you should like it too, because it makes you look up to yourself because in Star Wars there is a lot of fighting going on. It makes you look up to yourself by the fighting and if someone comes up to you and bullies you can do some of the moves that is in  the movies. The moves are magical because every hit would hurt and the moves are also powerful.

Secondly in the movies 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 it is very interesting and it is relaxable it is so relexable you can even have popcorn. It relates to the movies because it has the same characters but in the star wars 7 movie they have gone very old.

My third and final reason is because you can also make jokes about it and there is Star Wars days plus on the star wars day you can say “ May the 4th be with you” or you can say “ May the force be with you.”

Now hopefully you like Star Wars now!

It was about a bit tricky even though love star wars. It is my argument writing. My teacher for this was Mr M.

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